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Jen Eden's avatar

I think this is my favourite of your ‘40 until 40’ pierces so far, Jade. It’s such a beautifully simple narrative on the surface yet so very evocative and with such depth. I loved reading the context around it as well and feel the struggles of that time - pursuing conception through IVF is absolutely brutal. ❤️ It was really interesting to hear the other memories that came up for you but that, in the end, you felt didn’t work in the poem. I think the end result is perfect and beautifully crafted. Thank you for sharing.

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Jade Brooke-Langham's avatar

Thank you for taking the time to provide such lovely feedback Jen. I'll be sure to share it with my Nan when I next see her, as she is the reason the poem exists!

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