I think this is my favourite of your ‘40 until 40’ pierces so far, Jade. It’s such a beautifully simple narrative on the surface yet so very evocative and with such depth. I loved reading the context around it as well and feel the struggles of that time - pursuing conception through IVF is absolutely brutal. ❤️ It was really interesting to hear the other memories that came up for you but that, in the end, you felt didn’t work in the poem. I think the end result is perfect and beautifully crafted. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for taking the time to provide such lovely feedback Jen. I'll be sure to share it with my Nan when I next see her, as she is the reason the poem exists!
I think this is my favourite of your ‘40 until 40’ pierces so far, Jade. It’s such a beautifully simple narrative on the surface yet so very evocative and with such depth. I loved reading the context around it as well and feel the struggles of that time - pursuing conception through IVF is absolutely brutal. ❤️ It was really interesting to hear the other memories that came up for you but that, in the end, you felt didn’t work in the poem. I think the end result is perfect and beautifully crafted. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for taking the time to provide such lovely feedback Jen. I'll be sure to share it with my Nan when I next see her, as she is the reason the poem exists!